Silently Questioning It All ~AWARDED~/~*ROTD*~
A chance taken spoken emotionslooking for a ‘no’ only to get an ‘I don’t know’that melted into what appearedto be an unspoken ‘yes’ which left me soaring walking on sunshine stuck in my headBut alas...
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You know what I like in this entire write?...is the wondering the not knowing ....but despite that ...u are still there...as if all of this has no bearing ...like a true friend would only do...that's...
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thankseversuchamuch for reading di! I don't know if I ever will. At least, not right now. maybe in time? sometimes I wonder if I will ever know - and how long do I wait to find out the answers ......
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A line from a Christina Rossetti poem came to mind as I read your words: "My love for you is life, and not just a breath." (Not sure that is ver batim but close enough). Sometimes we wonder what...
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I agree very much with Ellen Lorr, feather light wording intertwined with a yearning for what was before, beautifully done...Keith.
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Friends and a love that can not be denied, its the hardest place to be. Once those lines are crossed every thing changes...and there is really no going back...too much heart involved. You presented...
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indigoleaves~ Ah dear sweet friend, ya know I hope he wakes up here eventually!Wonderful spill about it, at least! I know it's kinda had your muse all bound up tight!But your verse was flowing free...
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My dreamsyou invade them perpetually(and you once said no one would ever dream of you)sleeping and waking all the samefirst and last thought of every day I hope he 'comes to' and realizes the rose...
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I hope the eyes open up to the realms of possibilities that you offer hon.What you write of here I know so very well.I do believe dawn eventually comes to everyone eyes, hopefully the rise will not be...
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wow Lorr.........how many times have i been through these words.....thinking and feeling and questioning and never knowing for sure.....how many times have i put someone through this......taking a...
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I don’t know where to go from here wandering, not yet lost, but no longer found searching the stars and whispered wishes cast to the wind to be caught by the heavens with unspoken dreams laced...
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- Wonderful ! dear friend of the Stars.Every word seems so true and feels heartbroken, naturally... It is a good thing to write, much is said. The heart of the matter I found into work on ‘you’(but...
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This took my breath away in the deepest crevices of all the heart you brushed throughout this Lorr *Sigh* I felt every leap, every whisper... Your heart shines Sweet Friend, I hope his will too......
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to each of you that have popped in on this one, and you ellen especially for gracing this with the honour, thank you so very much! the heart aches but it goes on and there are times where I'm...
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Your heart feels dark and blackbut in reality a golden one.
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Lorr you weave your feeling into words which are exquisite. This is crystal clear and filled with anguish. You articulate this relationship in emotionally powerful patterns. This is truly fine poetry....
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I felt the desperation in between all the lines. Something is not so right in the chemistry, the more you push for it to balance the less stable it seems to get. Sometimes you have to let a silence...
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